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beautiful art, but the voice actors aren't ideal. The pacing is stuffy and slow.
story wasn't engaging to me, however I'm half a moron.
Good luck to you.
Thanks for watching and for the honest feedback!
there's 1 funny idea in here. that the bus is late for work.
look, just plan it out a little better next time.
Gnarly
i wish the frame rate was higher, and you could improve on telling more clear stories, with wider more cinematic shots. I'm only nit picking bc this is good, keep making this and your toons will slay very soon.
this is actually like 5 years old. I'm new to new grounds and am just starting to post my oldest work first. but this was also my first video and I agree with all of your observations! you absolutely correct.
Funny lil clip. Keep pushing. siiicck!
Thank you!!
cute
need better voice actors, great animation.
I'm a bit of a moron so i found it kinda dull for my tastes, but you're clearly talented.
epic
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TissueClock
BananaGlock
A.R. Neptune
Artist
Brantford, Ontario
Joined on 3/26/05